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KEY G Major METER 4/4 FORM Intro -> Verse -> Interlude -> Verse -> Refrain -> Verse (instrumental) -> Refrain -> Interlude -> Verse -> Outro (w/complete ending)
GENERAL POINTS OF INTEREST
- This folk song, spiked by just a little shot of blues, is a welcome contrast (or perhaps, antidote) to what might be called the various excesses scattered all over the rest of the double White album; no pejorative connotations intended.
- The song is a marvel of deceptive simplicity: the raw materials used are both simple in nature and small in number. Yet, they are recombined with a quiet, clever economy that makes them sound quite rich.
- The song also features a surprisingly large amount of free-verse uneven phrasing.
- The home key of G is clearly sustained throughout, though the Major mode of the verse sections is supplanted in the refrains by a bluesy Dorian mode; i.e. the one with minor 3rd and 7th degrees (the white note scale on ["this is"] D.")
- The lyric's encouraging message to proactively rise above one's most innate challenges is nicely abetted by the way in which the high points of the tune are deployed: a high 'D' as early as the 3rd measure of the verse, and the REALLY high 'G' (the climax of the song) smack in the middle of the refrain, right where the V-of-V chord appears.
- There's just acoustic guitar and a metronome! For those of you who, like myself, first encountered this song on vinyl, I am curious to know if anyone else ever entertained an initial suspicion that the ticking was caused by an extraordinarily well-synchronized scratch on the platter? :-)
- The lead vocal is intimately done up single tracked for the verse, and doubled for the refrains.
- The guitar part is dominated by a progression of parallel 10ths, the "melodic" thrust of which drives the harmony in broad brush; i.e. not every measure contains a chord of Roman numeral/grammatical significance. As a matter of training your ear, I recommend you try listening to this track while actively blocking out the vocal, and concentrating on those 10ths in the guitar part; try it, you'll like it.
- A rather obvious compositional lesson, but one worth pointing out in any event: if you're going to add a birds-chirping effect to a song in which the same creatures figure in the lyrics, then don't use them for the whole piece, and if you use them for only "half," then save them for the *latter* half. That said, I don't believe this song would lack anything if the birds had been omitted.
SECTION-BY-SECTION WALKTHROUGH
- The intro is identical to the accompaniment of the verse section's first phrase; see 'A' phrase below.
- The placid mood of the verse is belied by its flexibly uneven phrasing; first phrase being 2 beats longer than three measures, second phrase of 4 measures, third phrase of 3 measures, and finally another 4 measure phrase:
**'A' Phrase *1/2 measure* |B C |D |b - |- | |G A |B |g - |- | G: I **'B' Phrases |E G |F# A |G - |- | |C C# |D D# |E - |Eb - | IV vi |F# G |E - |Eb | |D Db |C - |- IV |D - |C# - |C natural - |B - | |B - |A - | - |G - | I6/3 V-of-V V7 I
- I'm dishing out the Roman numerals sparsely here. Yes, if you want to get fussy about it you can droom-up such numerals for every change in this section, but I reiterate my earlier comment that your ear is largely carried along by the melodic motion here, rather than by harmonic (i.e. root) "progression." Scale-wise bassline movement retains the special power to make this work, especially when it is made to move chromatically by half-step, as happens here part of the time.
- The first verse, only, is followed by the following instrumental connecting section, which is a kind of four-measure condensation of the previous six measures:
**'C' Phrase |E D |C# - |C natural |B | |C B |A - |D |G | IV I6/3 V-of-V V7 I
- The second verse proceeds directly into the refrain without the 'C' phrase.
- The refrain also features uneven phrases (4 + 5), IN SPITE of its otherwise parallel, AA' sub-structure:
|A G |F E |D - |E - |
|F E |D C |Bb - |C - |
IV IV
|A G |F E |D - |C# - |C natural |
|F E |D C |Bb - |A - |D |
IV V-of-V V
- Again, I'm using a light hand with the chord labels. For example, I steer clear of labeling the chords on the downbeats of the first two measures of this section as having harmonic "roots" of their own; I hear them as appogiaturas or passing tones with respect to the C Major chords in the second half of those two measures.
- In the big picture, think of the entire first phrase as a prolongation of the IV chord, with the ultimate destination reached by the second phrase (A Major, V-of-V) being cautiously stepped back from at the last minute in the first phrase. Superb "word painting" in light of the song's message.
- The detailed form of the song from here to the end is a bit more complicated than typical. The first refrain elides with an instrumental exposition of the complete verse. The latter leads back into a repeat of the refrain, which is followed this time with:
An instrumental extension of Phrase 'A' above, which outro-like, leads to a brief halt, but wait; there's still more!
An intro-like section that is constructed out of phrases 'A' and 'C' elided together.
- At this point, the birds enter, and the song moves into its final verse.
- The outro grows out of the final verse with yet another example of the three-times-you're-out gambit; something, again, that rhetorically fits here in terms of the underlying message.
- And one last bird-related lesson: let the sound effect persist a rough second or two AFTER the music stops, because neither alternative of shutting off the birds either before the music or EXACTLY at the same time as the music works as well.
SOME FINAL THOUGHTS
- We've got another case this time where the final version demonstrates some masterful reworking of the Esher demo:
- The demo gives away the entire verse whereas, in general, you'd be better off holding a couple of the cards up your sleeve, or at least, if you're going to give the whole verse away in the Intro, then at least do not double up on the sung verses; e.g. compare with "Martha My Dear."
- In spite of the long intro, the demo lacks most of the instrumental insterludes that appears in the final version; no 'C' phrase intervenes between the first two verses, the instrumental third verse contains the final phrase sung, and there outro/re-intro after the second refrain is eliminated.
- The demo ends with a "four-times-you're-out" gimmick which not only seems a too-long violation of the rhetorical Rule of Three, but also undermines the flow by NOT repeating the sung tag line in the second repeat.
Regards,
Alan ([email protected])
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"Well, me mother said the trip u'd do him good." 121497#139
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